Hey bud, It looks really good. Heres my two cents... Not sure how detailed the assignment is, but couple things came to mind. Maybe a little more anticipation, show us how he feels about what he's about to do. Is he confident, apprehensive etc... then maybe have him slip a little part way through. Again not sure how detailed you're supposed to get. Just some thoughts. Rock on bud :)
thanks for the feedback Paul I love those points I want to definitely add those but limited to how many frames we can use so they wanted us to think more about getting the body mechanics right verses acting in this class. I might try to go in and add that after the class is over.
Your weight looks good so far. I realized after I send it that both my ideas add frames & I know you're under a strict frame count... Anyway... Cool stuff... Have fun with it!!!
Hey bud, It looks really good. Heres my two cents... Not sure how detailed the assignment is, but couple things came to mind. Maybe a little more anticipation, show us how he feels about what he's about to do. Is he confident, apprehensive etc... then maybe have him slip a little part way through. Again not sure how detailed you're supposed to get. Just some thoughts. Rock on bud :)
ReplyDeletethanks for the feedback Paul I love those points I want to definitely add those but limited to how many frames we can use so they wanted us to think more about getting the body mechanics right verses acting in this class. I might try to go in and add that after the class is over.
ReplyDeleteYour weight looks good so far. I realized after I send it that both my ideas add frames & I know you're under a strict frame count... Anyway... Cool stuff... Have fun with it!!!
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